2009年4月7日星期二

summary & the best paragraph of my narrative

Summary:During the winter vacation I went to visit my friend. And we went to see a special performance done all by disabled people. When they were performing one of a deaf girl fell down. However she stood up calmly and continued the performance. I was moved and admired her because of her optimism and sturdiness.

The best paragraph:

They remembered all the positions and moves, although they could not hear the music or the clapping or they could not see the audience. Once they were changing their formation, one deaf girl fell down because of a bulge in the floor. I worried and stretched my neck to see what she was going to do. She stood up calmly with a smile. She got back to her position and continued the performance. The entire audience clapped for her. I was moved like others. If I fell down in front of audience during a performance, how embarrassing it would be. I would not behave as clam as she did. She was so optimistic and sturdy. She was not like most people, she was deaf. If she lost her confidence or she was beaten up by that. Then her life would simply crash. In spite of her deafness, she still could enjoy her life and do lots of meaningful things. Obviously, she had chosen to have a good life. Then she needed to be persistent. She had to build her confidence. She could not learn things by looking at them. She had to learn from what she had heard, felt or touched. Definitely there would be more difficulties since she was deaf. If she wanted to overcome those challenges. She was forced to become stronger than others.

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